Missing Home
Missing Home
Far from my home
I am here in boarding school
with different emotions in my heart
but not single of happiness in my heart
I always tried to be happy
but whenever in my heart
Mr. happiness come
to make me happy😄😄😃
Mr. loneliness always come
and make me always sad😑😔😞
There is full of sadness around me
I really hate this lonely feelings
I want happiness around me
where it keeps my mind, and body good.
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wow it is beautiful and I love it 💙 but need to improve your writing😀😊
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ReplyDeleteyou forget to put some comma dude but its weell written
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